Thanks so much. It is a difficult and heartwrenching topic. I’m just happy it seems to have worked well.

……..dhole

Thanks so much. And I’m honored that you would consider letting your daughter read it. Of course with the proviso that you discuss it after she did. You’ll have to let me know if she actually does read it or not.

This is an incredibly difficult topic but you did an incredible job of handling it. You captured the horror of the incident and the emotion of Tory. Beautifully done.

Thanks so much for your comments. A tough subject, but one I enjoyed taking on.

Once I got myself mentally ready, the words flowed out onto the page. Then I tweaked little bits here and there and added some detail. I knew the direction I wanted to go, put in the headphones, took a deep breath and typed.

Thanks.

Thank you. I appreciated the opportunity to try my hand at something powerful, I’m glad you liked it.

I think your use of small details, like Millard the bear, are what really makes this scene hit home. And the way Tory disconnects is particularly powerful.

Thanks for including the links, too.

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